This is a good yarn with plenty of action. I do feel as if the author does get too involve with describing his thoughts. Good writing but get on with the story and stop burning pages off. Keep the same main character, but make him more physical. Identify the lead man's weapon better. If it's a Colt .357 Magnum Python, with a 6 inch barrel, and Packmire grips say so. If he uses special ammo ( which you say he does ) explain what it is and why it does what it does. You say nothings about Scot carring a backup peice. Anyone that has ever been in these types of situations always goes with a backup peice. Sorry for hamering about these item's, but I think this author has a lot going for him and could become another Jack Higgins. KEEP WRITTING.
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